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marina's avatar

I wrote a short story many years ago that was a bit similar to this beautiful poem of yours. In yours the absurdity of our behaviour is exposed so clearly and leaves one almost disoriented…

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Sofia Batalha's avatar

I don’t understand how something so foundational is so violently invisible 🫥

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Chris Robertson's avatar

Beautiful! And so true

We are blessed

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Sofia Batalha's avatar

Thank you Chris 🙏 we are indeed!

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